Tykwa's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Heaven's Missive]

Yep

It just sounds like it's missing somthing, everything is fine but for now it's seeming like some type of ambient wavy-ness, the bass sounds a bit wierd, the strange eerie vibing sounds are unusual, what this needs is somthing big too come into it, maybe a better (or put one in) melody, but good work so far, it just sounds unfinished, and like you said really monotonus, and it didn't seem uplifting at all for me.

-Tykwa

Good Luck.

Death-9 responds:

I'd have to agree with you. Not really psy- or goa- trance, more like ambient trance... It was late night where I was when I made this, so I was too tired to add a melody and WAY too tired to tweak some of the bad parts.

I particularly shouldn't have added the little noise that kicks in at like 0:29, but I liked the sound when I was listening to it by itself... It's the only time I used it :P

I'm not too good with automation, so I added the bass-line individually. My fingers hurt from that...

Unfinished- Yes, and I doubt I'll make a finished version. I'd love to have the full version of FL Studio 8, but I only have the demo so far :(.

Anyways, thanks for the review :) I hope to make a song every week, but I make no promises.

[growing on me]

Sweet

It sounded real lovely, I can kind of tell you tried to not make it so repetitive, but using long (i'm not good on terms) melody always makes it a bit harder, anyways basically after 1:10 it was a bit repetitive, but ok it kept changing tunes just a bit to help it along, It then got prety good again bout 1:36, about 2:05 the whole thing gets a bit repetive, this is where you might want to throw somthing kickass in to spice the whole song, but I understand it might not fit into the song, the crap at 3:20 could have came in much sooner as there was almost no buildup of tension to the ending tune-awesomeness, The very last of the song let me down for such a basic ending.

Tykwa`s
Rar rev's :)

snayk responds:

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked the song.

I'm actually quite pleased with the progression and transitions, but I appreciate your input.

[Digital Analog]

Good try.

Some parts were good, some out of sound, some not making sense, but it was okay, I don't know all the music lingo but some of the guitarish sounds were a bit out of tune I think, the best part was acually about 0:15, and the end, a part at 30 kinda ruined it for me.

z0mbie87 responds:

an honest review for a humble artist. i truly appreciate you taking the time to review my work! plz feel free to review some of my other stuff. (+ i'm still uploading the rest).

PS - yeah i've realized it's a pretty heavy song that prolly wouldn't do well to play on repeat for very long.

[..::Scars::..]

Awesome

No-Lie, this almost made me cry, it's wonderfully done and it has a nice death-sad tone but at the same time is happy, I just enjoyed this 5/DL/ I hope this goes gol/plat or anything.

Sylacone responds:

Aww thanks, im glad i can have emotional feelings put through my music. I'm glad you could hear it.