Tykwa's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ulllua D-minor]

hmm

A lot of these intruments don't really sound too well together, the drums are a bit low, nothing really shines here, too many things are going on most of the song, the synth is probably the most prominent thing, for some reason, the song feels dragged on most of its time.

Comlock responds:

=D Thanks for the critique Tykwa.
When I think about it, the things you mention seem abolutley true^-^

I should probably find some more time to tweak on this since the mixing is quite bad atm. The kick drum probably has too much base, and because of that the sound from it kept clipping over. I wasn't too comfertable using the compression and limiting in this app yet, so instead I ended up getting to low on the drums^^

[untitled (Dubstep)]

ok.

The clap sound seems a little too loud, the first melo-synth that's playing seems a bit too much out of tune, the melo is alright, reminds me of yankee-doodle, the light0ambient sounds really add to this track, at 1:09, the synth that comes in is a little too aggresive and dark to fit the rest of the song, and the back-synth is too loud on the highs.

Sythec responds:

Thanks, I appreciate an objective critique now n' then!
The pad @ 0:32 and Sub-Synth that rolls in @ 1:09 will be the base harmony-
I'll have to get the other synths and tints in order- not sure what melody i'll fit in-
Basically shat a few different patterns together to see.

I'll refer to your points when and If i get around to a proper mix.
:D

heres a F-INCREDIBLE track by Silkie
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JZfKRv vDUhI

[{ANT} - Agent Smooth]

Sweet

Definitaly sounds cool, love the midi/8bit sounds, melody is great, transitions are ok, might need a bit of mastering, the piano sounds a tad loud, guitar doesn't seem to fit in here, but it makes it, theres a small arpish in the background, which I would love to hear much louder!

Anth0n responds:

I made that arp myself, I'm pretty proud of it :)

["Technation" (WIP)]

Heya

Im really liking the vibes from this one, You really need too get this one done ^.^, It is repetitive, but doesn't matter :P, Good Melo, Just finish up on the rest, even though it already does sound a bit finished, the little break towards the end is a little off/ feeling, the Intro is great, how it feels as if the sound jumping around, and then it comes full, building up properly.

Get it done!
PS: In alot of your songs ive noticed that they arent exactly high-quality, you have 7MG to fill up, imo, use it all too your best ability!

Rukkus responds:

Thanks for the great review man. And ik, up until this point, ive still been a noobie at making music-learning as i go. So i'll def up the quality when i render it. Much appreciated.

[NEON :: Px]

cool

Pretty cool synths, good beat, great melody, Isn't too repetitive while keeping progressive and changing things up here and there.

5/5
8/10

GrantProjectXero responds:

Thank you. Glad you heard what I was trying to accomplish.
-Px

[sadly happy - josh]

thanks

this melody and how you brought it out is fucking amazing, its so sweet and brightens what im going thru as of now, Im sure if I wanted to critisize things i can but the synth and melody is so fucking sweet and beutifull.

thecokebitch responds:

whoa haha, best review for anything so far.... but seriously, if you do like this, have a listen to:
'neopolitan dreams' by Lisa Mitchell

its amazing haha

[Stuck In Madness]

Meh

Way too many presets, atleast make them sound a bit more different, way repetitive, preset molodies >.>

joseepabloo responds:

well thx for the advice, but i used just 2 presets, that' s not a lot to me :)

[StianK_DagenDerpå_(BeatSource)]

cool

Although I can't understand the lyrics, its real lovely, I could definitly tell your style at :45, Always those nice synths

Ethalyn responds:

Wow thanks man :) Hehe looks like you reviewed just before i posted the lyrics ;) Thanks a bunch ^_^

[**==HappyTranceDance==**]

cool

The first part of the song, the synth reminded me alot of Daft Punk, but it gets repetitive, and you start using alot of presets, with a bit of tweaking they wont sound like that at all ( and just a bit ) :D, otherwise it was alright, gl.

monk1 responds:

Aw dude if I could make music like Daft Punk... *drools with joy, and a little Attention Deficit*

I really don't much about Tweaking the instruments, other than the X and Y levels, and anytime I mess with anything else I end up regretting it, or it loses sound, so I usually don't bother.

Still Glad you liked it!

Thanks for Review!

[BeatSource_Clubland Experience]

=O... =D

Awesome, I can fucking shuffle to this =D

Ethalyn responds:

YESH! =D Shuffle the day away! ^_^