Sweet
It sounded real lovely, I can kind of tell you tried to not make it so repetitive, but using long (i'm not good on terms) melody always makes it a bit harder, anyways basically after 1:10 it was a bit repetitive, but ok it kept changing tunes just a bit to help it along, It then got prety good again bout 1:36, about 2:05 the whole thing gets a bit repetive, this is where you might want to throw somthing kickass in to spice the whole song, but I understand it might not fit into the song, the crap at 3:20 could have came in much sooner as there was almost no buildup of tension to the ending tune-awesomeness, The very last of the song let me down for such a basic ending.
Tykwa`s
Rar rev's :)