Tykwa's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Firsts]

Good

The intro was nice, some of the things were re-used too much, (although I understand from your limited choices and such) it was good, at 3:04 You added a nice (not good with terms) vib-ish thing, but should be changing the bass a bit here and there, I belive it's the same thing for too long, also anything over 3 or so loops (too me) is repetitive without some sort of drastic change, (the things you add from 3:04 and 4:20 weren't enough too help the repetivive, the piano-ish sounds was a nice touch, the climatic-ness of around 5:30 were some of the best, and I would like to add it had a great ending to the song, For this being your first song, and aswell only using demo-ness a great song.

So, The first and last parts were the best, the middle was too repetitive for me (maybe shortening some parts) also I like the length of the song, you might could (if you wanted to you could improve it to about 5 minutes wihout so much repetivite-ness)

-Tykwa.

(Have fun making music!, Maybe I can join you someday :D )

[growing on me]

Sweet

It sounded real lovely, I can kind of tell you tried to not make it so repetitive, but using long (i'm not good on terms) melody always makes it a bit harder, anyways basically after 1:10 it was a bit repetitive, but ok it kept changing tunes just a bit to help it along, It then got prety good again bout 1:36, about 2:05 the whole thing gets a bit repetive, this is where you might want to throw somthing kickass in to spice the whole song, but I understand it might not fit into the song, the crap at 3:20 could have came in much sooner as there was almost no buildup of tension to the ending tune-awesomeness, The very last of the song let me down for such a basic ending.

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Rar rev's :)

snayk responds:

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked the song.

I'm actually quite pleased with the progression and transitions, but I appreciate your input.

[Digital Analog]

Good try.

Some parts were good, some out of sound, some not making sense, but it was okay, I don't know all the music lingo but some of the guitarish sounds were a bit out of tune I think, the best part was acually about 0:15, and the end, a part at 30 kinda ruined it for me.

z0mbie87 responds:

an honest review for a humble artist. i truly appreciate you taking the time to review my work! plz feel free to review some of my other stuff. (+ i'm still uploading the rest).

PS - yeah i've realized it's a pretty heavy song that prolly wouldn't do well to play on repeat for very long.

[The crazy Loop]

Hmm...

This has some real potential... maybe take it and put it for a intro... damn I could imagine what the real song would sound like, maybe take off that (whatever grainy filtery sound) pump the bass and poke the vibes, damn this would be kickass.

[Final Redemption]

Awezomez

Yes, from the start, to the very last pick of the pick, this song was epic.

[Fucking Metal (farcrydx)]

Bash,Smash,Crash.

Yes, Very Anus-Blasting Action to be had here!

[..::Scars::..]

Awesome

No-Lie, this almost made me cry, it's wonderfully done and it has a nice death-sad tone but at the same time is happy, I just enjoyed this 5/DL/ I hope this goes gol/plat or anything.

Sylacone responds:

Aww thanks, im glad i can have emotional feelings put through my music. I'm glad you could hear it.