Meh
Way too many presets, atleast make them sound a bit more different, way repetitive, preset molodies >.>
Meh
Way too many presets, atleast make them sound a bit more different, way repetitive, preset molodies >.>
well thx for the advice, but i used just 2 presets, that' s not a lot to me :)
I like it
I like the sound from this, simplistic yet holds a sort of meaning, good work ^.^
cool
Although I can't understand the lyrics, its real lovely, I could definitly tell your style at :45, Always those nice synths
Wow thanks man :) Hehe looks like you reviewed just before i posted the lyrics ;) Thanks a bunch ^_^
hey
Ive now just noticed that this song didn't have any reviews at all, so I guess it was lonely, and asking for it, Ive just re-visited this song browsing thru my favorites, and was surprised when I heard this, This is one of my favorites, I love it, it has that progressive feel to it, without, which is surprising getting ~~too repetitive, I love it, and you did great work.
cool
The first part of the song, the synth reminded me alot of Daft Punk, but it gets repetitive, and you start using alot of presets, with a bit of tweaking they wont sound like that at all ( and just a bit ) :D, otherwise it was alright, gl.
Aw dude if I could make music like Daft Punk... *drools with joy, and a little Attention Deficit*
I really don't much about Tweaking the instruments, other than the X and Y levels, and anytime I mess with anything else I end up regretting it, or it loses sound, so I usually don't bother.
Still Glad you liked it!
Thanks for Review!
=O... =D
Awesome, I can fucking shuffle to this =D
YESH! =D Shuffle the day away! ^_^
I like
I liked it, but for some reason it heavily reminded me of Unreal tournaments theme (the old one) but nice job, good song and awesomely long and keeps you going without getting too repetitive,
Yep
It just sounds like it's missing somthing, everything is fine but for now it's seeming like some type of ambient wavy-ness, the bass sounds a bit wierd, the strange eerie vibing sounds are unusual, what this needs is somthing big too come into it, maybe a better (or put one in) melody, but good work so far, it just sounds unfinished, and like you said really monotonus, and it didn't seem uplifting at all for me.
-Tykwa
Good Luck.
I'd have to agree with you. Not really psy- or goa- trance, more like ambient trance... It was late night where I was when I made this, so I was too tired to add a melody and WAY too tired to tweak some of the bad parts.
I particularly shouldn't have added the little noise that kicks in at like 0:29, but I liked the sound when I was listening to it by itself... It's the only time I used it :P
I'm not too good with automation, so I added the bass-line individually. My fingers hurt from that...
Unfinished- Yes, and I doubt I'll make a finished version. I'd love to have the full version of FL Studio 8, but I only have the demo so far :(.
Anyways, thanks for the review :) I hope to make a song every week, but I make no promises.
Sweet
The intro was cool, but what blew me was the hard ass pump (not good with terms :P) at 0:18 and 1:05 It sounded real beastly :), Like the song altough it is repetitive and short and the end was a bit sudden, but okay for a short song.
-Tykwa
Good
The intro was nice, some of the things were re-used too much, (although I understand from your limited choices and such) it was good, at 3:04 You added a nice (not good with terms) vib-ish thing, but should be changing the bass a bit here and there, I belive it's the same thing for too long, also anything over 3 or so loops (too me) is repetitive without some sort of drastic change, (the things you add from 3:04 and 4:20 weren't enough too help the repetivive, the piano-ish sounds was a nice touch, the climatic-ness of around 5:30 were some of the best, and I would like to add it had a great ending to the song, For this being your first song, and aswell only using demo-ness a great song.
So, The first and last parts were the best, the middle was too repetitive for me (maybe shortening some parts) also I like the length of the song, you might could (if you wanted to you could improve it to about 5 minutes wihout so much repetivite-ness)
-Tykwa.
(Have fun making music!, Maybe I can join you someday :D )
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